This week I spent 15 minutes revising my summary.
I spent 25 minutes doing the in the book reading assigned for monday
I spent 20 minutes braingstorming what to write about elizabeth, then trying to think of how to link the ideas together.
I will spend one hour working on my paragraph for elizabeth. (after i submit this)
I will spend probably 30 minutes revising for rough draft due monday (after i submit this)
It took me forever to read the in book assignment, even though it was short, because my friend kept texting me while i was reading, and it seemed like as soon as i put my phone down from my reply they would text me back ,it was a never ending process, eventually i just stopped texting.
I'm not really sure if i know how to put together the paragraph about Elizabeth. I have my information written down, I'm just not so sure how to organize it. Actually, I dont even know where to begin. Topic sentence : Elizabeth is a loving person, or something relatively close to that. My facts are detailed explanations about Elizabeths pictures, things people wrote in her yearbook, and letters from friends. So those are my three catagories. I think I just use my examples to explain those three things.
I really shouldn't have even started texting while i was trying to do my homework, but its just a bad habbit. I would of been done with everything so much faster though. I understood the reading that was assigned this week. The problem with the assignment is I just dont know exactly how to even start it :S. What if my reasons aren't a good enough for what I choose?
Do i literally say I know elizabeth is a loving person because you can tell in every picture. In one picture she is holding a baby and smiling, you can tell she cares about the child. In the picture with her friends, shes laughing and holding on to them. Stuff like that?
I'm not sure what my exact thing about Elizabeth is. I don't know how to describe exactly what i want to say. I know shes a really good friend, a loving person, has always been there for her friends. How do I sum that up all in one sentence?
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